The Red Door Dream
The Red Door Dream
I see the red door in a dream, partially obscured by swaying tree branches. I feel the soft wind on my face, cool air brushing my cheek. I hear the strong, steady beat of my heart as I step forward. I am unafraid. Time slows. My legs start to feel heavy. I bite my lip and it starts bleeding. My face flushes with heat and my vision starts to blur. I wake up drenched with sweat.
The dream is recurrent. Each time, I draw closer to the door but wake before reaching it. The journey seems endless. The anticipation is agonizing.
Even when awake, I re-live the dream. I wonder if I can make myself reach the door in my sleep. I talk to myself. I tell myself I can do it. It is hard to think of anything else. I look for the door everywhere I go.
Now, here I stand, only inches away from touching the door. My heart starts to race. I am afraid. I don’t know what to expect. I no longer know if I am dreaming. I gasp for air and take an unsteady step back.
The red door opens.
*this post seems to meet the requirements for several blogging challenges as follows:
The Daily Post weekly photo challenge,Door, challenges us to post a photo and consider how the elements might add up to a story.
Laura’s Literary Lion challenge asks us to include the word “bleeding” in our post of 400 words or less.
A late addition to Andy’s Dark Side Thursday which challenges us to create a dark story.
And, I think this photo belongs in Lucile’s Photo101Rehab Clinic too.
Posted on July 3, 2015, in Flash fiction, Photo101 Rehab, Photography, The Red Door Dream (Fiction) and tagged #photo101rehab, Dark Side Thursday, door, dream, flash fiction, literary lion, Photo challenge, Photo101 Rehab, photography, red. Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.
That was a very clever combination of all three prompts! Is this based on a real recurring dream you’ve been having? I wonder what Freud would say about it…
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Thank you. I haven’t had this exact dream, but now that you mention it, I used to have recurring, unsettling, dreams of being lost in a big house with scary rooms! Maybe that would inspire another part of the story. Ooh, I hope i don’t have that dream tonight. I shudder to think of Freud’s analysis!
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Dreams are always such a good source of inspiration, as long as you remember them! I often wake up thinking “well that would make a great story”, but I’m half asleep, so I write nothing down, and then it’s all gone in the morning. Yours does sound like it would make a great partner to this story though!
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And possibly DarkSideThursday as well! Great post Tildy. You really built the suspense throughout the piece with the pace and flow of your words. Excellent!
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Hey, thanks! That is quite a compliment. Do you think I should I tag it and make it a late post for dark side or would that be against the rules?
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I think you have all week to add it so no, absolutely not! It would be a great addition to DST!!
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I took the plunge. I am a joiner!
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Good work.
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Thrilled to see this contribution to dark side Thursday!
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Wow what a great story, the tension builds and we live that fear with you, fighting to breathe, and what a skilful way to combine all three challenges! Love it, as for rules on dark side thursday, there are no rules…on the dark side…
Would love to see this story develop!
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Thanks for the encouraging words!
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My pleasure!
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It’s a strong post Tildy, offering high quality imagery and words to serve 4 or many more prompts!
Well done! I’m happy you took the bite to join Andy’s dark side! Totally matching it.
And once again thanks for being a loyal patient of the Photo Rehab!
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I’m pleased to get such positive feedback on this! Thank you, Lucile.
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