Sorrow
Sorrow Haiku (Screen)
Screening sorrow’s sting
Seeking solace from sadness
Soothing of spirit
*posted for writing 201, prompt-screen, poetic form-haiku, poetic device-alliteration
Posted on October 5, 2015, in Poetry, Writing 201 and tagged #writing201, alliteration, haiku, Poetry, screen, Writing 201. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.
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Sorrowful and sad… Stupendous! 😉
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Thank you Michelle. I am glad the emotion came through in the words.!
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What an unusual and beautiful take on the prompt! Thanks for visiting mine just now, and commenting — I’m so glad to have found yours!
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Thank you for your kind words!
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It’s a pleasure.
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You are a master of Alliteration and Haiku! Yay! 😀
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Wow! That is quite a compliment. thank you!
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Totally deserved compliment! 😀
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Well Done!
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Thanks so much Jacqueline!
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You are welcome Tildy 🙂
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There’s a tremendous quiet achieved by the alliterative ‘s’ sounds. Well done that’s great use of all three prompts 🙂
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Thank you for sharing your feedback and insight Colette!
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You’re welcome. It’s a powerful haiku 🙂
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My goodness, this is the most alliterated haiku I have ever read! It is beautiful and makes sense and sounds lovely to the ear. Well done! 🙂
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Beautifully sad, yet understandable thus comforting.
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Thank you Noirfifre. I really appreciate your comment!
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Terri, this haiku is profound and beautiful! You rock, poet!
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Thank you so much. I am glad the meaning came through.
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You’re more than welcome. You’re a natural.
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Thanks again!
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My pleasure.
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