Chill

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Chill

A brush of wind paints a rosy face. Chilled skin brightens, tightens. Pink cheeks stretch into a smile. Stinging cold is rubbed away before numbness sets. With crisp air, comes clarity. No more heated words, no more furious flush of skin. Cooler thoughts prevail.

*posted for Writing 201, prompt-skin, poetic form-prose poem, poetic device-internal rhyme

Posted on October 7, 2015, in Poetry, Writing 201 and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.

  1. Oh. This is a vividly described poem. Nice!

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  2. I love the first line.: A brush of wind paints a rosy face. cool.

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  3. Fabulous Tildy. I could feel the chill. And a great photo!

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  4. I’m running short of words to praise you poetic skulls! Chapeau!

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